Author’s Note: This is my response to the video of “A Clean, Well-Lighted Place,” originally written by Ernest Hemingway. I will analyze it, and evaluate it.
I noticed in the video clip for “A Clean, Well-Lighted Place” that the music was really off. It was a good choice for music for this story because it matches the mood and theme of the story. I also noticed how bright the cafe was, even when it was dark. The lighting made it seem really clean and well-lighted hence the title of the story.
One of the things that I liked about the story was that the message was clear. The two waiters were talking about the old man, and the looks on each of their faces made people know what was going on. When the old man left, the older waiter looked like he was going to cry, and that’s a hint that the older waiter was wise, sympathetic, and understanding for the old man. The younger waiter showed signs of annoyance such as rubbing his face, and having an attitude to both the other waiter and the old man. The reason I like how the story was put together is because the message was clear through the actor’s actions and tone of voice.